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media type="custom" key="20786684"Narative - The Taniwha strikes again!!!!media type="custom" key="20786698"

“Breaking news, there is a volcano warning for mount ruapahu. We cant seem to track it’s exact position but we think it is located somewhere near Dasinbel Drive, evacuation is probably a great idea. I am Charlie Sudan at channel three.”

Jack loved adventuring. He had brown hair and shadow brown eyes. The day the Volcano warning was put on TV, jack was out cutting trees on Dasinbel Drive! Jack was carrying a sharp knife probably as sharp as a sharks tooth.

Jack was just about to cut down a tree but he stopped. Jack felt the ground shaking heavily. (crack) there was a big crack in the middle of the road. Jack lost his balance, he slipped through the big crack in the middle of the road and into the deepest part of the ocean (smack).Jack had hit his head on a rock right next to a volcano. (He fainted.)

under the sea the ground was shaking more violently then on top. (rumble rumble gurgle gurgle)BOOM the lava was poring out of the volcano at high voltage speed.As the last bit of magma had came out, a slithering creature came out too. It was a taniwha. The taniwha had spikes all down its back, it had lava red all around the taniwha’s body and it had a large Koru on it’s face. The Taniwha slithered around sniffing and looking around with its big googily eyes then..... it spotted jack. Raaaaaaa!!!!!!!!

Jack woke up with squinting eyes and a sunken mouth, staring at a large set of spiky teeth.(chomp) the mysterious Taniwha ate jack and swallowed him whole.

The Taniwha began to swim to the top of the sea as jack began to realize that he wasn’t dead he remembered he had a sharp knife in his hand.(slice) Jack used the knife to cut through the Taniwha's stomach and swam to the top of the sea and got out. He looked behind him, the Taniwha red body was slowly sinking back to where it belonged.